Fracteried fairy tale

My Reflection

I was learning to write a fractured fairy tale.

The hardest part was making my own story.

My next step is to make one that is based on a real story.

Fractured fairy tale

I was learning to write a fractured fairy tale.

The trickiest part was basing it on a fairy tale.

My next step is to make it more like a fairy tale. 

Swimming dolphins

My Reflection

We had swimming this year it was so warm and so cool.

We had groups called dolphins and sharks.

This year I found tricky was gliding.

My next step is to learn to glide better and breath under water. 

My Reflection

I was learning to write my own fairy tale.

The easiest part was Making my own.

My next step is to

Term 4 Week 6

On Saturday Me and my Dad went to my dad's friends house to work on the car.  When we got there my dad's car and we had to sand the car before it gets painted and get's the motor in and get it all ready to go. We I started and my hands got covered in white sanding.  When we finished we had some lunch that me and my dad went to get.  We all got a ham subway, It was so yum.  Then me and my dad went back home and had some dinner straight away, it was so late. We had a chicken burger, it was yummy. Then it was my bed time.

Sunday morning me and my family had some breakfast, we had bacon and egg on toast.  Then we had a day at home.  Then we watched a movie on the TV called the hunger games.  Then it was bed time.  The next day it was school day.

Term 4 Week 5

On Saturday me and my family went for a walk in the city and to the park.  Then me and my dad cleaned the garage and started the motorbike up.  Then my cousin came over. when my cousin  got there my dad went and pumped my bike tires up.  Then my dad let off some fireworks.  Then me and my cousin  watched a movie in our bed it was called pixels.

The next day me and my dad went to Waiuku  to take my dad's motor out of his car with his old work mate. I brung my remote control drift car because I was going to get bored when my dad was fixing on the car.  When my dad was finished it took us an hour to get home.  When we got home me and all our friends came over for a barque and dinner.  Then it was my bed time and I watched TV.

narrative framework

My Reflection

I was learning about the different parts of a narrative story.

The easiest part was that I knew this story.  I understand the different parts of a narrative story

My next step is to write my own fractured fariytale.