Thursday, 6 April 2017

Camp Merc acrostic poem.



Walt:edit and revise my Camp Merc writing for clarity and impact in response and feedback.

Learning Reflection.
I found this activity easy because I have done lots of acrostic poems before.I did make changes to my poem after getting my feedback from Thomas and Reuben. I made some spelling mistakes and I corrected them because Reuben spotted them.

Next time when I do my writing I am going to get a red pen and edit I will underline my spelling mistakes I will check for the red lines under the incorrect spelling.



1 comment:

Mrs P said...

Great acrostic poem Kayde. I really enjoyed reading your camp experiences. You have written a great reflection and I am please you made some changes based on Reuben's feedback.