Wednesday 20 August 2014

Using different language features.

I use a hook in my writing so people go wow and want to read my story.  For my story about my lava lamp, I used onomatopoeia. I found it a bit tricky because all of the spelling I had to do and the hook because of all the onomatopoeia.  Next time I will use a question.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

Well done Kayde, I really like how you have used onomatopoeia to create an interesting hook. Great job!